1st lesson free
Lily
- Rate 269 BWP
- Response 1h
269 BWP/hr
Contact
1st lesson free
- Redaction
- Proofreading
- Rhetoric
A history and English student who proofreads and revises essays from middle to high school students.
- Redaction
- Proofreading
- Rhetoric
Lesson location
About Lily
I am a motivated, hard-working, and community-driven student at the University of South Carolina with a strong academic foundation in the International Baccalaureate and Advanced Placement programs. An experienced student-athlete with proven leadership, customer service, and management skills. I am actively engaged in service and campus involvement, including mentoring others and participating in organizations that strengthen communication, collaboration, and problem-solving abilities. I am committed to pursuing a career in law while continuing to grow as a leader, critical thinker, and positive change-maker within both the campus community and beyond.
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About the lesson
- Primary
- Junior Secondary
- Secondary School
- +9
levels :
Primary
Junior Secondary
Secondary School
Première
Standard 7
Diploma
Supérieur
Adult Training
Master's Degree
Doctorate
MBA
Early Childhood education
- English
All languages in which the lesson is available :
English
My approach focuses on clarity, structure, and academic precision. Rather than simply correcting mistakes, I help students understand why changes are made so they can improve their writing independently over time. I work closely with each text to correct grammar, improve sentence flow, tone, and academic style, strengthen argumentation, ensure consistency, clarity, and logical progression in order to adapt writing to the required academic level and discipline. I use in-text comments and targeted explanations, highlighting recurring issues and offering concrete strategies to avoid them in future work. A typical lesson or revision session includes initial review of the assignment brief, grading criteria, and writing guidelines, detailed proofreading focusing on language accuracy and readability, structural and stylistic revision, improving clarity, transitions, and argument strength, margin comments and explanations to explain key corrections and suggest improvements, feedback summary, outlining strengths, common issues, and clear next steps. If requested, we can also schedule a follow-up session to review revisions together and address questions.
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Rates
Rate
- 269 BWP
Pack prices
- 5h: 1345 BWP
- 10h: 2690 BWP
free lessons
The first free lesson with Lily will allow you to get to know each other and clearly specify your needs for your next lessons.
- 1hr
online
- 269 BWP/h
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